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L1948L at 02:32, 20 January 2026

2026-01-20T02:32:04Z

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L1948L: L1948L moved page Lain Visual Novel Project/Come to the Wired to Come to the Wired over redirect

2025-05-04T01:39:00Z

L1948L moved page Lain Visual Novel Project/Come to the Wired to Come to the Wired over redirect

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L1948L: L1948L moved page Come to the Wired to Lain Visual Novel Project/Come to the Wired

2025-05-04T01:38:38Z

L1948L moved page Come to the Wired to Lain Visual Novel Project/Come to the Wired

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Navi: clean up, typos fixed: don’t → don't (25), … → ... (6), isn’t → isn't, You’re → You're (2), she’s → she's, There’s → There's (2), It’s → It's (6), ’s → 's

2022-12-31T08:14:58Z

clean up, typos fixed: don’t → don't (25), … → ... (6), isn’t → isn't, You’re → You're (2), she’s → she's, There’s → There's (2), It’s → It's (6), ’s → 's

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Prince at 20:15, 1 November 2021

2021-11-01T20:15:56Z

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	''Black screen. Words, center, type in''		''Black screen. Words, center, type in''

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	'''「死ぬ時？」'''		'''「死ぬ時？」'''
	'''“What was it like when you died?”'''		'''“What was it like when you died?”'''

Bytor at 21:11, 3 July 2013

2013-07-03T21:11:34Z

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	== Second Draft (ain) ==		= Second Draft (ain) =
	Scene 0.		===Scene 0.===
	''Black screen. Words, center, type in''		''Black screen. Words, center, type in''

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	''Fade out.''		''Fade out.''

	Scene 1, Classroom, Day.		===Scene One, Classroom, Day.===
	''Ambient hushed whispers. Image, sheet of paper with class play, in moonspeak. [Can be legitimate, like Love-Suicide at Amajima, or we could just stick text from scenario experiments lain in].''		''Ambient hushed whispers. Image, sheet of paper with class play, in moonspeak. [Can be legitimate, like Love-Suicide at Amajima, or we could just stick text from scenario experiments lain in].''

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	'''Chisa:''' “I’m sorry…”		'''Chisa:''' “I’m sorry…”

	Scene 2, Bedroom, Night.		===Scene Two, Bedroom, Night.===
	''Image, Chibi-Navi login screen. Ambient noise from computer fans.''		''Image, Chibi-Navi login screen. Ambient noise from computer fans.''
	(「だれ？」		(「だれ？」
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	I belong there.		I belong there.

	Scene Three, Streets, Late Afternoon.		===Scene Three, Streets, Late Afternoon.===
	''Image, streets, include bloody shadows. Ambient waan waan waan 50MHz hum.''		''Image, streets, include bloody shadows. Ambient waan waan waan 50MHz hum.''

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	I don’t know why, but I can’t seem to do anything right.		I don’t know why, but I can’t seem to do anything right.

	Scene 4, Bedroom, Night.		===Scene Four, Bedroom, Night.===
	''Image, screen, closeup of some words on the screen. Ambient computer noises.''		''Image, screen, closeup of some words on the screen. Ambient computer noises.''
	(ここに神様がいるよー)		(ここに神様がいるよー)
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	''Chisa:'' Right…it doesn’t need me.		''Chisa:'' Right…it doesn’t need me.

	Scene 5, Empty Corridor, Late afternoon.		===Scene Five, Empty Corridor, Late afternoon.===
	''Silence''		''Silence''

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	'''Chisa:''' “I…would be better off not being in a place like this…”		'''Chisa:''' “I…would be better off not being in a place like this…”

	Scene 6, Front hall, evening		===Scene Six, Front hall, evening===
	''Image, open package with a Psyche processor nearby. Should be something like an envelope.''		''Image, open package with a Psyche processor nearby. Should be something like an envelope.''

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	''Fade to black''		''Fade to black''

	Scene 0.2		===Scene 0.2===
	''Slowly fade in words from before.''		''Slowly fade in words from before.''

Ain at 21:07, 3 July 2013

2013-07-03T21:07:12Z

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Ain at 21:05, 3 July 2013

2013-07-03T21:05:57Z

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Ain: Second draft.

2013-07-03T20:59:26Z

Second draft.

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Bytor at 22:20, 2 July 2013

2013-07-02T22:20:37Z

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	'''Chisa:''' '...don't need to be here.'		'''Chisa:''' '...don't need to be here.'


			''not fitting in scenes''