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	Thing is, 死ぬ時？ seems really, really incomplete. Based on my (limited and mostly based on anime/VNs) knowledge of Japanese, shouldn't it be something like 死ぬ時、どんな感じですか？ It would have to be longer, though. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 09:37, 6 July 2013 (UTC)		Thing is, 死ぬ時？ seems really, really incomplete. Based on my (limited and mostly based on anime/VNs) knowledge of Japanese, shouldn't it be something like 死ぬ時、どんな感じですか？ It would have to be longer, though. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 09:37, 6 July 2013 (UTC)

			In the show, there was onscreen text that said 死ぬ時？・・・痛かった　（笑） It's quoting that. I assume it's an abbreviated form of 死ぬ時はどう？ It should be left as is. --[[User:Ain\|Ain]] 02:48, 16 July 2013 (UTC)

	==ideas from irc==		==ideas from irc==

Amysteriousgal at 09:37, 6 July 2013

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			==Japanese stuff==

			First off: ''Nice.'' This draft looks a lot more interesting.

			Thing is, 死ぬ時？ seems really, really incomplete. Based on my (limited and mostly based on anime/VNs) knowledge of Japanese, shouldn't it be something like 死ぬ時、どんな感じですか？ It would have to be longer, though. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 09:37, 6 July 2013 (UTC)

	==ideas from irc==		==ideas from irc==

Bytor at 22:18, 2 July 2013

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Bytor at 21:59, 2 July 2013

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	02.1910:54 < denkimusume> So you have the school play scene as mostly same		02.1910:54 < denkimusume> So you have the school play scene as mostly same
	02.1911:35 < denkimusume> Then instead of going straight to Wired, we have a montage of Chisa just not fitting in, I guess?		02.1911:35 < denkimusume> Then instead of going straight to Wired, we have a montage of Chisa just not fitting in, I guess?
	02.1911:43 < denkimusume> This includes her going to Cyberia		02.1911:43 < denkimusume> This includes her going to Cyberia

Bytor at 21:58, 2 July 2013

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			==ideas from irc==
			here's the ideas that ain had:

			02.1910:54 < denkimusume> So you have the school play scene as mostly same
			02.1911:35 < denkimusume> Then instead of going straight to Wired, we have a montage of Chisa just not fitting in, I guess?
			02.1911:43 < denkimusume> This includes her going to Cyberia
			02.1911:46 < denkimusume> and stuff
			02.1911:54 < denkimusume> just get all that out of the way early on
			02.1912:03 < denkimusume> Then we have the first Wired scene
			02.1912:07 < denkimusume> where she's useful
			02.1912:13 < denkimusume> and we combine that with the second
			02.1912:23 < denkimusume> where they comfort her and stuff
			02.1913:05 < denkimusume> Next we have her walk home with lain
			02.1913:29 < denkimusume> And we take some ideas from the last walk in the empty corridor and add that into this scene
			02.1913:37 < denkimusume> this scene should probably be the longest
			02.1914:32 < denkimusume> We have the last Wired scene where the Knights inform her that 'God is here' and tell her about the Psyche processor
			02.1915:00 < denkimusume> We can include a VERY brief reiteration of the last walk in the empty corridor, minus most of the lain stuff
			02.1915:16 < denkimusume> More morbid than anything
			02.1915:25 < denkimusume> Then the last scene is the Psyche processor arriving
			02.1915:37 < denkimusume> Literally fuck the rooftop scene we don't need it
			02.1916:31 < denkimusume> The player KNOWS what happens to her, we don't need to draw it out in its detail
			02.1917:12 < denkimusume> And to be honest the scene itself as I see it written here doesn't express anything that the previous scenes don't already establish
			02.1918:18 < denkimusume> If we want it to be really cool the first line of the thing could be
			02.1919:36 < denkimusume> frig I can't type moon here
			02.1919:43 < denkimusume> but the card
			02.1920:08 < denkimusume> 'Ne, shinu toki?' (what was it like when you died?)


	==music==		==music==

Bytor at 22:42, 18 March 2013

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	There's no music designed into it right now - it's probably too short to warrant many tracks anyway, and in the spirit of Lain, most of the sounds are noise.		There's no music designed into it right now - it's probably too short to warrant many tracks anyway, and in the spirit of Lain, most of the sounds are noise.

	Does anyone think it's too short or paced strangely or anything? I might expand on some of those scenes, perhaps add some more dialogue... This story would be more suited to NVL mode, where the text fills the whole screen rather than just a box at the bottom, I think. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 16:13, 15 December 2012 (UTC)


			==length==

	I still have the impression that something needs to be added to this one. It seems empty. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 13:12, 19 December 2012 (UTC)		I still have the impression that something needs to be added to this one. It seems empty. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 13:12, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
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	::One place I could see lengthening it is to maybe have some content as she decides to go to the Wired. I don't think she would be in a state to just jump right away, so maybe some more debating it, finding out what is involved, getting convinced? I do like what is here, and I think it will work well as a sort of intro, first story for the collection- lengthening it to much may ruin that "prelude" feel. [[User:Bytor\|Bytor]] 22:20, 19 December 2012 (UTC)		::One place I could see lengthening it is to maybe have some content as she decides to go to the Wired. I don't think she would be in a state to just jump right away, so maybe some more debating it, finding out what is involved, getting convinced? I do like what is here, and I think it will work well as a sort of intro, first story for the collection- lengthening it to much may ruin that "prelude" feel. [[User:Bytor\|Bytor]] 22:20, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

	:::Now that I think about it more, if anything were added, it probably should be pretty short; the way this is written (and SEL itself), is very efficient and compact when it comes to dialogue. Just enough to get rid of that "ok, why is she just killing herself?" feeling that the method of entering the Wired can give.[[User:Bytor\|Bytor]] 22:22, 19 December 2012 (UTC)		:::Now that I think about it more, if anything were added, it probably should be pretty short; the way this is written (and SEL itself), is very efficient and compact when it comes to dialogue. Just enough to get rid of that "ok, why is she just killing herself?" feeling that the method of entering the Wired can give.[[User:Bytor\|Bytor]] 22:22, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

	::::Yeah, I'll elaborate on that a bit. May as well mention Eiri, too. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 11:31, 20 December 2012 (UTC)		::::Yeah, I'll elaborate on that a bit. May as well mention Eiri, too. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 11:31, 20 December 2012 (UTC)


			==required viewing==

	Do we maybe want to do this so that the first time you launch the VN, it does a basic options screen, then jumps straight to this VN? Then, each subsequent launch goes to the title screen. Assuming ren'py supports this, of course. [[User:Bytor\|Bytor]] 22:31, 19 December 2012 (UTC)		Do we maybe want to do this so that the first time you launch the VN, it does a basic options screen, then jumps straight to this VN? Then, each subsequent launch goes to the title screen. Assuming ren'py supports this, of course. [[User:Bytor\|Bytor]] 22:31, 19 December 2012 (UTC)

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	:There's a splashscreen thing built in, so we could use that. I have no idea how to make the prologue only play the first time the game is opened, though. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 11:31, 20 December 2012 (UTC)		:There's a splashscreen thing built in, so we could use that. I have no idea how to make the prologue only play the first time the game is opened, though. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 11:31, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

	::There's probably a way to save/read a state from a file (if launched=1, skip prelude or something like that). --[[~~Special~~:~~Contributions/62.145.191.2~~\|~~62.145.191.2~~]] 13:10, 20 December 2012 (UTC)		::There's probably a way to save/read a state from a file (if launched=1, skip prelude or something like that). --[[User:アラベスク\|アラベスク]] 13:12, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

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	:There's a splashscreen thing built in, so we could use that. I have no idea how to make the prologue only play the first time the game is opened, though. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 11:31, 20 December 2012 (UTC)		:There's a splashscreen thing built in, so we could use that. I have no idea how to make the prologue only play the first time the game is opened, though. [[User:Amysteriousgal\|Amysteriousgal]] 11:31, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

			::There's probably a way to save/read a state from a file (if launched=1, skip prelude or something like that). --[[Special:Contributions/62.145.191.2\|62.145.191.2]] 13:10, 20 December 2012 (UTC)

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	here's the ideas that ain had:		here's the ideas that ain had:

	02.1910:54 < denkimusume> So you have the school play scene as mostly same		02.1910:54 < denkimusume> So you have the school play scene as mostly same
	02.1911:35 < denkimusume> Then instead of going straight to Wired, we have a montage of Chisa just not fitting in, I guess?		02.1911:35 < denkimusume> Then instead of going straight to Wired, we have a montage of Chisa just not fitting in, I guess?
	02.1911:43 < denkimusume> This includes her going to Cyberia		02.1911:43 < denkimusume> This includes her going to Cyberia
	02.1911:46 < denkimusume> and stuff		02.1911:46 < denkimusume> and stuff
	02.1911:54 < denkimusume> just get all that out of the way early on		02.1911:54 < denkimusume> just get all that out of the way early on
	02.1912:03 < denkimusume> Then we have the first Wired scene		02.1912:03 < denkimusume> Then we have the first Wired scene
	02.1912:07 < denkimusume> where she's useful		02.1912:07 < denkimusume> where she's useful
	02.1912:13 < denkimusume> and we combine that with the second		02.1912:13 < denkimusume> and we combine that with the second
	02.1912:23 < denkimusume> where they comfort her and stuff		02.1912:23 < denkimusume> where they comfort her and stuff
	02.1913:05 < denkimusume> Next we have her walk home with lain		02.1913:05 < denkimusume> Next we have her walk home with lain
	02.1913:29 < denkimusume> And we take some ideas from the last walk in the empty corridor and add that into this scene		02.1913:29 < denkimusume> And we take some ideas from the last walk in the empty corridor and add that into this scene
	02.1913:37 < denkimusume> this scene should probably be the longest		02.1913:37 < denkimusume> this scene should probably be the longest
	02.1914:32 < denkimusume> We have the last Wired scene where the Knights inform her that 'God is here' and tell her about the Psyche processor		02.1914:32 < denkimusume> We have the last Wired scene where the Knights inform her that 'God is here' and tell her about the Psyche processor
	02.1915:00 < denkimusume> We can include a VERY brief reiteration of the last walk in the empty corridor, minus most of the lain stuff		02.1915:00 < denkimusume> We can include a VERY brief reiteration of the last walk in the empty corridor, minus most of the lain stuff
	02.1915:16 < denkimusume> More morbid than anything		02.1915:16 < denkimusume> More morbid than anything
	02.1915:25 < denkimusume> Then the last scene is the Psyche processor arriving		02.1915:25 < denkimusume> Then the last scene is the Psyche processor arriving
	02.1915:37 < denkimusume> Literally fuck the rooftop scene we don't need it		02.1915:37 < denkimusume> Literally fuck the rooftop scene we don't need it
	02.1916:31 < denkimusume> The player KNOWS what happens to her, we don't need to draw it out in its detail		02.1916:31 < denkimusume> The player KNOWS what happens to her, we don't need to draw it out in its detail
	02.1917:12 < denkimusume> And to be honest the scene itself as I see it written here doesn't express anything that the previous scenes don't already establish		02.1917:12 < denkimusume> And to be honest the scene itself as I see it written here doesn't express anything that the previous scenes don't already establish
	02.1918:18 < denkimusume> If we want it to be really cool the first line of the thing could be		02.1918:18 < denkimusume> If we want it to be really cool the first line of the thing could be
	02.1919:36 < denkimusume> frig I can't type moon here		02.1919:36 < denkimusume> frig I can't type moon here
	02.1919:43 < denkimusume> but the card		02.1919:43 < denkimusume> but the card
	02.1920:08 < denkimusume> 'Ne, shinu toki?' (what was it like when you died?)		02.1920:08 < denkimusume> 'Ne, shinu toki?' (what was it like when you died?)