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= Second Draft (ain) = | |||
Scene 0. | ===Scene 0.=== | ||
''Black screen. Words, center, type in'' | ''Black screen. Words, center, type in'' | ||
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''Fade out.'' | ''Fade out.'' | ||
Scene | ===Scene One, Classroom, Day.=== | ||
''Ambient hushed whispers. Image, sheet of paper with class play, in moonspeak. [Can be legitimate, like Love-Suicide at Amajima, or we could just stick text from scenario experiments lain in].'' | ''Ambient hushed whispers. Image, sheet of paper with class play, in moonspeak. [Can be legitimate, like Love-Suicide at Amajima, or we could just stick text from scenario experiments lain in].'' | ||
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'''Chisa:''' “I’m sorry…” | '''Chisa:''' “I’m sorry…” | ||
Scene | ===Scene Two, Bedroom, Night.=== | ||
''Image, Chibi-Navi login screen. Ambient noise from computer fans.'' | ''Image, Chibi-Navi login screen. Ambient noise from computer fans.'' | ||
(「だれ？」 | (「だれ？」 | ||
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I belong there. | I belong there. | ||
Scene Three, Streets, Late Afternoon. | ===Scene Three, Streets, Late Afternoon.=== | ||
''Image, streets, include bloody shadows. Ambient waan waan waan 50MHz hum.'' | ''Image, streets, include bloody shadows. Ambient waan waan waan 50MHz hum.'' | ||
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I don’t know why, but I can’t seem to do anything right. | I don’t know why, but I can’t seem to do anything right. | ||
Scene | ===Scene Four, Bedroom, Night.=== | ||
''Image, screen, closeup of some words on the screen. Ambient computer noises.'' | ''Image, screen, closeup of some words on the screen. Ambient computer noises.'' | ||
(ここに神様がいるよー) | (ここに神様がいるよー) | ||
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''Chisa:'' Right…it doesn’t need me. | ''Chisa:'' Right…it doesn’t need me. | ||
Scene | ===Scene Five, Empty Corridor, Late afternoon.=== | ||
''Silence'' | ''Silence'' | ||
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'''Chisa:''' “I…would be better off not being in a place like this…” | '''Chisa:''' “I…would be better off not being in a place like this…” | ||
Scene | ===Scene Six, Front hall, evening=== | ||
''Image, open package with a Psyche processor nearby. Should be something like an envelope.'' | ''Image, open package with a Psyche processor nearby. Should be something like an envelope.'' | ||
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''Fade to black'' | ''Fade to black'' | ||
Scene 0.2 | ===Scene 0.2=== | ||
''Slowly fade in words from before.'' | ''Slowly fade in words from before.'' | ||