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== Second Draft (ain) ==+
{{VNProject}}
{{VNProject}}
−= Second Draft (ain) =
−Scene 0.
+===Scene 0.===
''Black screen. Words, center, type in''
''Black screen. Words, center, type in''
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''Fade out.''
''Fade out.''
−Scene 1, Classroom, Day.
+===Scene One, Classroom, Day.===
''Ambient hushed whispers. Image, sheet of paper with class play, in moonspeak. [Can be legitimate, like Love-Suicide at Amajima, or we could just stick text from scenario experiments lain in].''
''Ambient hushed whispers. Image, sheet of paper with class play, in moonspeak. [Can be legitimate, like Love-Suicide at Amajima, or we could just stick text from scenario experiments lain in].''
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'''Chisa:''' “I’m sorry…”
'''Chisa:''' “I’m sorry…”
−Scene 2, Bedroom, Night.
+===Scene Two, Bedroom, Night.===
''Image, Chibi-Navi login screen. Ambient noise from computer fans.''
''Image, Chibi-Navi login screen. Ambient noise from computer fans.''
(「だれ？」
(「だれ？」
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I belong there.
I belong there.
−Scene Three, Streets, Late Afternoon.
+===Scene Three, Streets, Late Afternoon.===
''Image, streets, include bloody shadows. Ambient waan waan waan 50MHz hum.''
''Image, streets, include bloody shadows. Ambient waan waan waan 50MHz hum.''
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I don’t know why, but I can’t seem to do anything right.
I don’t know why, but I can’t seem to do anything right.
−Scene 4, Bedroom, Night.
+===Scene Four, Bedroom, Night.===
''Image, screen, closeup of some words on the screen. Ambient computer noises.''
''Image, screen, closeup of some words on the screen. Ambient computer noises.''
(ここに神様がいるよー)
(ここに神様がいるよー)
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''Chisa:'' Right…it doesn’t need me.
''Chisa:'' Right…it doesn’t need me.
−Scene 5, Empty Corridor, Late afternoon.
+===Scene Five, Empty Corridor, Late afternoon.===
''Silence''
''Silence''
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'''Chisa:''' “I…would be better off not being in a place like this…”
'''Chisa:''' “I…would be better off not being in a place like this…”
−Scene 6, Front hall, evening
+===Scene Six, Front hall, evening===
''Image, open package with a Psyche processor nearby. Should be something like an envelope.''
''Image, open package with a Psyche processor nearby. Should be something like an envelope.''
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''Fade to black''
''Fade to black''
−Scene 0.2
+===Scene 0.2===
''Slowly fade in words from before.''
''Slowly fade in words from before.''
