Omnipresence in Wired: Difference between revisions

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 |A picture of Lain on a semitransparent piece of paper.
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+|03package illustration : DVD+LD+CD
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+|04 others : game+poster+etc
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+|05 layer
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+|06 pencil drawing + step by step
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 |colspan="3"|This book has a total of 153 pages.
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 ''Also under constructino lol''
-One would think that since ''Rebuild'' is 25 pages longer, it has more content. But it's not really so; some images that were printed on a single page in the original were given two pages in ''Rebuild''. ''Rebuild'' also has many dividing pages that are blank except for the title of the next section of the book. Things like this contribute to the book's length without providing much new content over the original. There are even some sketches that appear in the original which did not make it into ''Rebuild''.
+=== What Rebuild has that the original does not have ===
+*Two new illustrations and their rough sketches
+**Lain under an overpass
+**Cover illustration
+*Pre-effects images of some of the Layers
+*Step-by-step for the Layer 02: Girls illustration
-=== What Rebuild has that the original does not have ===
-*bigger pictures
-more details to come
 === What the original has that Rebuild does not have ===
 *[[Chibi Chibi Lain]]
-*some more stuff
+*[[Looker]] illustrations
+*Gekikare! A Sales Promo Ad By Dame-Dame Lain (comic)
+*Many of the rough, conceptual sketches in the monochrome sketch section
+===Other miscellaneous differences===
+'''Layer text''': In ''Rebuild'', the text of the Layer illustrations were re-translated and of course the English was re-typeset, sometimes in completely different positions. A typesetting error was introduced in Layer 11. In some of the illustrations the Japanese text was also re-typeset, and in some cases completely removed. The Rebuild translation is perhaps better than the original's in general, but the typesetting looks better in the original as it's styled to blend with the image. In Layer 09, the patch of code floating to the right of lain was replaced with different code. Excepting the Layer images, there is no Japanese text to be found anywhere in the English version of ''Rebuild''.
+''Pencil Sketches'': As stated above, there are many rough sketches in the original ''Omnipresence'' that don't appear in ''Rebuild''. However, those sketches that do appear in ''Rebuild'' are generally much larger.
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